Wonder full day, nowhere to go untill my truck gets running again. right now it is sitting outside a garage in town....sigh.....So I have done some cleaning and a little cooking.
Now to come up with a poem
Marking Time
Intrusive, only the sounds of man
into the quiet of the day
Black against grey clouds
the trees stand over green
carpet stained in rust
First snow, but a memory
caught in the dampness of
cool breeze
Crows brackish calling, silent...
Dreams undisturbed...
Fall's early sleep unbroken
The harsh tick of twig on twig
marking the time till spring awakens
ccd Nov. 2011
I wrote 3 more Haiku this week. I was told it is not a good choice for subject matter since I have an affinity for nature. The three were inspired by this weeks episode of NCIS. The theme has been in the back of my mind for some time. The friend says I write of life I should not write of death whic is what the Haiku are about. He says it stinks of death an finality.
I guess I wrote it correctly then for it is sad and final.
Heroes' End in Three Haiku
Beneath hallowed cloth
Wooden box satin pillow
Heroes' final bed
Horse hoof beats the dirge
Walking to eternal sleep
Caisson rolls silent
Headboard of marble
Name lays claim to heroes' home
bugle sings for rest
ccd Nov. 2011